Fanfiction Themes #3

Love, The Most Dangerous Weapon Of All (A Pride and Prejudice and Zombies Fanfiction) written by EmoGirlWhoLovesGA

This fanfiction again takes a very different tone from the other two. Unlike the other two fanfictions, this one feels very romance heavy. The author has killed off our heroine and introduced her own female lead (Named Ruby - A name I personally don't think fits with the era, rubies didn't become a popular gemstone until the 1990s), who they will eventually get to fall in love with Mr Darcy (Making an assumption here but it isn't hard to pick up). I personally feel this author doesn't understand the characters as much as maybe the other two, some of the lines and actions the characters say or do I don't think represent their personalities and seem very "out of character". The spelling and grammar in this text are also not the best, which negatively impacts the fluidity of the text, and can also be distracting for the reader.